Yes I do believe
In life after this
If what I have been taught
Of heaven and hell is true
Then my wholeย  life
Is in vain

If I must suffer
In hell
For wrongs committed here
If it is I who’s hurt
Who pays for my every mistake
Do I not have claim
To this soul I house

And if it is so;
And I do all that’s needed
To enter the pearly gates

Can I choose to not stay?

If I live “right”
And by the book
Can I in the end
Choose extinction
And not eternal life?

Or is there a spell to kill a soul?

5 Comments Add yours

  1. Hi Hellen!
    I love the words to your poem here! There are a lot of insights I have seen about death after life. 1 that I choose comes straight from the Bible which is no more than making a decision of how you live your life here to where you go after death! I am writing of my life & opportunities to help others so they can help themselves in their ventures in life. If you would like to hear some poems of mine, email me through my blog which is lynnsblogs.wordpress.com & I will enter them in a different link as I get pages filled or add posts that need a different category. Have a great day & will be back soon to read more of your works. I think they are an excellent way of getting others to respond.

    1. hellenmasido says:

      Thanks Rodney! i guess we all kinda want to have a clue of what next after this huh? i am kinda leaving much of what i have been taught to seek my own beliefs with logical reasons that stem from fairness and justice rather than blind faith.i will most definitely check out your poems! cheers๐Ÿ™‚

  2. gdalexander says:

    A haunting poem with vivid imagery. Well written! I will return to read more of your work.

    I have a new writing blog that I created after self-publishing my first novel on Kindle. Please check it out and share your writing experiences with me!

    1. hellenmasido says:

      thanks G.D.! i checked out your blog and i already followed you. working my way to get your book. read the sneak peek and cant wait to see the rest๐Ÿ™‚

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